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Mr Brown
1:54
Maybe you could a simile?
1:55
Amia
1:55
very green
Mr Brown
1:55
More detail please Amia.
max and harry
1:56
Big like a giant
Mr Brown
1:56
I'm not keen on the word 'big'. Could you write it again using a different word?
Luca
1:56
BIG PLANTS AND LUSTROUS
Mr Brown
1:56
I love the word lustrous. Could you use a simile to describe the colour of the trees?
gracie and ella
1:56
as green as a frog
mia emily
1:56
it is as GREEN like a JUNGLE
alfie and jake
1:57
lots of  plants more then I seen
Corban and Oliver
1:57
A Jungle that is tropical
Mr Brown
1:57
Can you use a simile to describe the jungle?
alfie and jake
1:57
green giant like a frog
oliver trey
1:57
it has a lot of trees
Diar and Louie
1:57
THERES an extremaly lanky thin tall#amazon tree
max and harry
1:57
tall like a giant
Toyah Hannah
1:57
The trees are as green as a cactus
Amia
1:58
green  as  a  jungle
gracie and ella
1:58
massive leaves
oliver trey
1:58
it is big
Mr Brown
1:58
Big is in jail!!!
Corban and Oliver
1:58
As tropical as the Amozon
alfie and jake
1:58
the green is that massive that its like titanic
evie
1:58
i can see some tall trees and lots of  green  leaves.
Seb Jack
1:58
tropical
mia emily
1:58
big like a monster what is green
Mr Brown
1:58
Ok no more comments for now please everyone. Fold your arms.
Samuel and Rylan
1:59
a huge,thin trees stood up for the  yellow sunlight.
Diar and Louie
1:59
the trees are as filthy as a frog
Luca
1:59
AS green  as a tree frog
Mr Brown
2:01
You have used some very good vocabulary in your writing so far. However, I know you can be even better. For this next challenge, I won't approve your writing if you haven't use correct capital letters and punctuation. Take your time!
2:02
This is the emergent layer. Write a detailed description of what you can see. Maybe you could include some of the animals that live there. Remember: if you don't use capital letters or punctuation I won't approve your work.
max and harry
2:03
There is a lot birds.
Mr Brown
2:04
Could you tell me more about the birds...
Corban and Oliver
2:04
Toucans and other tropical birds.
gracie and ella
2:04
The weather is hot and looks a bit foggy.
Seb Jack
2:04
High as the clouds.
mia emily
2:04
It is as huge as a tribe of giants that is how big it is.
max and harry
2:05
Colourful pretty birds.
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